Saturday, September 28, 2013

StarZ

He stared into perplexity as her eyelashes closed over the orbs of her eyes.
"This isn't it," he whispered thoughtlessly, "this isn't what we ever thought."
A feathered willow branch kissed her cheek as she drifted into dreams and 
while he talked she thought of the sound of his voice. 

Within his barrier there was a wall that covered more than his desires and 
all of his love. Somehow she could tear it down, with pleas or lies or
kisses planted atop his unbelief. Her fingernails grazed his rough knuckles
and he shivered with some unknown emotion that she wished with all her

heart that she could discover and capture within her, keep it forever in a
jar like an innocent firefly prisoner in an old, used plastic cup that she 
drank out of before it became a useful trap. His eyes were less than a river
and more of a black, all-seeing vortex that sucked in her thoughts without

a consent form to control her emotions and read her ideas to everyone in
the room before she could stop him. So she closed her eyes and he stared
at her transparent eyelids, waiting, wishing, hoping to glance that part of her
that he only could see and violate.






1 comment:

  1. "Her fingernails grazed his rough knuckles

    and he shivered with some unknown emotion that she wished with all her




    heart that she could discover and capture within her, keep it forever in a

    jar like an innocent firefly prisoner in an old, used plastic cup that she

    drank out of before it became a useful trap. His eyes were less than a river

    and more of a black, all-seeing vortex that sucked in her thoughts without




    a consent form to control her emotions and read her ideas to everyone in

    the room before she could stop him."

    LOVE THAT PART>. I was reading the post all gentle, then all the sudden the words forced me into this dark intense moment. I loved that! It put it all into such a great perspective and character moment feeling. A-mazing. Amazing amazing amazing.

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